Minggu, 24 Juni 2012

Conjunctions Joining related sentences

Addtional vs. Conclusive facts
ADDITION CONCLUSIVE FACT
And, and also, as well as, in addition, additionally, or also, introduces additional information. Furthermore, moreover, or besides, introduces a final fact in order to make a point or to support an argument.   conclusive fact (adj) – showing that something is definitely true (An argument is based on an opinion. A person takes a position and tries to prove that it is true. These words are commonly used in an essay when developing a thesis statement or topic sentence.)
Anne would like to play a dramatic role. Also, she thinks it would be fun to try comedy.
role (n.) – acting part
In my opinion,  Anne would be excellent in that movie.  She has done several dramatic roles and has lots of experience. Furthermore, she looks like the character in the book.
Alex has acted on Broadway (stage) and television.  In addition, he has acted in three movies. I think Alex is the best choice. He has acted on Broadway and on television;  moreover, he has played supporting roles in three movies.      Also see using semi colom
Beside having several dance competitions, Alex and Anne have family obligations. Alex and Anne won't be able to dance in the international competition in Rio de Janeiro.  They have too many other things to do.  Besides, they can't get a visa in time. 
Alex and Anne have to focus on their practices as well as their auditions. 
audition (n.) – to try out for a part, give a short performance to see if the person is good for the part
Alex and Anne have to focus on their practices and auditions.  They can't take time off to travel.  Another thing is, they have family obligations. (informal use only)

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