Minggu, 24 Juni 2012

Parallel Phrasing Joining Like Items with And and But

Choose Parallel Modifiers:
INCORRECT CORRECT
  Mixed word forms   adjective - adverb  Parallel word forms   adverb - adverb
My English is improving slow but surely. My English is improving slowly but surely.
*He welcomes us friendly and joyfully.   friendly (adj) He welcomes us in a friendly and joyful manner.
(Use in a... manner to change the adjectives friendly and joyful to parallel adverb phrasing.)
 
*Yellow highlighting indicates example of incorrect usage.



Choose Parallel Verb Forms:
INCORRECT CORRECT
   Mixed word forms  infinitivegerund   Parallel word forms   infinitve—infinitive
*Everyday, I need to write and communicating with others. Everyday, I need to write and (to) communicate with others.
*I spend time listen and laughing at his talk show.
 
I spend time listening to and laughing at his talk show.  (Also add the preposition.)
*I really like relaxing and enjoy my quiet time.
 
I really like relaxing and enjoying my quiet time
laught at (v.) to laugh because something is silly or stupid



Choose Parallel Phrases:
INCORRECT CORRECT
   Mixed phrase forms:  infinitive phrasenoun phrase   Parallel phrase forms:  infinitive phraseinfinitive phrase
*How to do that and the time I am doing that is a problem. How to do that and when to do that is a problem.
*I don't care who it is or the product he is selling, just hang up!
 
I don't care who it is or what he's selling, just hang up!

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